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written on the road...
Contributed by
omeoteotl
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Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 06:13:13 PM in AEST
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Written on the road
Between the house
And the home
One syllable was sold
To a mime.
A laughable gesture just
In two ways,
We parted among
The cold and divine.
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omeoteotl
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2010-05-17 18:13:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: written on the road...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shane1024 on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 07:22:43 PM AEST (User
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Great write. Gives a very vivid picture in so few words. good job. |
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Re: written on the road...
(User Rating: 1 ) by mind_me on
Wednesday, 19th May 2010 @ 08:11:31 PM AEST (User
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You have an interesting style, it's simple but says a lot. Nice work! |
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