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Past
Contributed by
Cdubs21
on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 01:22:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A river flowing from the heart.
A river that once flowed a vibrant red,
filled with love and joy,
now runs a deep dark black,
filled with anger and hate.
Tortured by lies.
The waves crash into the banks,
with each smash,
they begin to crumble away.
The banks they represent what was,
what will never be again.
A mudslide of happiness and trust,
Disappearing, seeping deep into the water.
A heart torn and shattered.
Copyright ©
Cdubs21
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2010-05-17 13:22:46]
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Re: Past
(User Rating: 1 )
by tjmontanagirl on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 01:24:52 PM AEST
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WOW!
very intense poem, a great read! i enjoyed it..
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~Taylor |
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Re: Past
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by Mars on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 05:08:50 PM AEST
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Ouch.
Sad.
Nice. |
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