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misleading heartbreak:(
Contributed by
Meghanforever
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Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 04:53:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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those words you said were never true.
those 3 words, i.love.you.
you said that we would last forever
while you held me close, our hands together.
all we heard was the pouring rain.
but i guess the happy ending never came.
it feels like im drowning in my tears.
it seems like im hiding from more than just fears.
we made such a great team.
but now all i want to do is scream.
why her and whats wrong with me?
just tell me the answers and set me free.
over text, in person, in email, or phone.
just help me get through this hard unknown.
because those words you said, they were never true
...
those 3 words i...love...you....
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Re: misleading heartbreak:(
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by Nevilleconnie on
Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 05:50:59 PM AEST
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| This is such a sad poem. But it's also a really good one. You summed up the sadness of lost love really well. Great job!! |
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Re: misleading heartbreak:(
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by ammar on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 09:22:47 AM AEST
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Words not being true always hurts. But you are right, it is most painful when those three words turn out to be false.
Good write.
Peace
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