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Wish
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 03:52:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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~Wish~
Wish, a wish on this moonlit night
To jump on a star, then take flight
back in time, leave all this behind
Drift, in the heavens find my mind
Let, me ride with a comets tail
from, star, to star, let me sail
Wave goodbye, to all on earth
Let, this be my night of rebirth
Let Stardust, rain down on me
moonbeam, fill my heart with glee
Find, my Angel fly with her far
Forever, then rest on my Star
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Fuzzy
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2010-05-16 03:52:55]
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Re: Wish
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 04:06:12 AM AEST
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| woo hoo paul is baaaaaaaaack missed yer and as per normal great write x |
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Re: Wish
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by shanat on
Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 04:07:48 AM AEST
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i also love anything to do with the moon and stars, have read it 3 or 4 times already:)
i also love that your wish is apon my rainbow:))
take care.
shanat:))) |
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Re: Wish
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 05:58:47 AM AEST
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This has such a taste of the ethereal. Being a part
of the cosmos is a dream I think many have in the
night. Stars are made for works like this. Beautiful.
Really nice post. -- Achelois
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Re: Wish
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by Nevilleconnie on
Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 08:30:41 AM AEST
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| This poem is so, so beautiful. How vivid these images are. A truly beautifully written poem. Great job!! |
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Re: Wish
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 12:42:43 AM AEST
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Very much imaginative beauty in this.
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Re: Wish
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by longhaircg on
Monday, 17th May 2010 @ 03:42:55 AM AEST
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yes I loved the ride on this one, awsome write, the feedom I felt whiles reading this was nice,
thankyou my friend, good to see you back.
SP |
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