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Prove me wrong
Contributed by
thebadguy9999
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Saturday, 15th May 2010 @ 05:20:59 PM in AEST
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Jesus is Messiah,try and prove me wrong. He is not in a grave, He sits on a throne. He carried our sins in the form of a cross.He gave up his life but not at a loss.For my savior lives, To him be the glory. He conquered the grave, You know the story.Jesus is our shelter,In him we are strong Satan is a coward,Come on, Prove me wrong.When Satan comes against you,Call on Jesus name. All evil will flee from you in cowardice and shame. The Lord will soon return,He is tired of all this sin. Look at the world around you,Can you not see we are near the end? Overseas they are killing people who give their life to Christ. God's army is getting stronger,The world is full of fright. You know that in this world is not where we belong. Tell me you do not feel the same, Bring it, Prove me wrong. Satan is searching for all the souls that he can devour. He is getting desperate cause he knows he is near his final hour.His ego is too big, He thinks he will not fail. Let us see how he feels when he is bound up in hell. Jesus will soon reign all over this land. He will take back his world without raising a hand.For his grace is sufficient,His mercies are endless. When you walk in his will you are never defenseless. Jesus is gracious and loving, mighty and strong,No matter what you say you will never prove me wrong
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Re: Prove me wrong
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Saturday, 15th May 2010 @ 10:23:47 PM AEST
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Comment removed. Personal insults will NOT be tolerated at YPDC. Please keep your comments to the poem itself. *Review site rules on commenting* Moderator_18 May 16, 2010
Note updated 5-17-2010. Just as a general FYI, please be advised that each author or poet has the prerogative to state a general opinion as long as it is acceptable within the site's posting guidelines / rules for the general section. This author stated a general Christian belief and did not personally attack or insult another member specifically by name or otherwise. The opinioins in this poem are being considered general in nature. This comment, while may have indeed critiqued the poem itself, crossed the line when it personally insulted the author of the poem. You may critique a poem. You may not personally direct insults at another member or attack another member.
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Re: Prove me wrong
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by Nevilleconnie on
Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 08:41:14 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem. I'm not an overly religious person, but I really did enjoy the message of this poem.
Great job!! |
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Re: Prove me wrong
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by Debris on
Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 11:09:11 AM AEST
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| I find this disturbing and OTT but then maybe that's a sign of a good write- it stirs emotions, albeit negative ones. |
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Re: Prove me wrong
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by shelby on
Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 08:22:55 PM AEST
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I myself am not into the organized religion deal, but I found your power and faith intense and honest.
The poem itself to me would read better if it were placed in stanza's. Other than that, good work.
Michelle |
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Re: Prove me wrong
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 16th May 2010 @ 11:13:24 PM AEST
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| By their fruits ye shall know them matthew 7 vs 16, I learnt the fruits as I am a preacher's daughter and they are love joy peace patience kindness goodness faithfulness,In this poem I hear your anger your zeal and your self righteousness but do not recognise the fruits.I do not doubt your faith but it is in the way people hear you and see where you are coming from that will open hearts to what you are saying. |
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Re: Prove me wrong
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by rambo56 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 04:32:26 AM AEST
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| well written keep writing |
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Re: Prove me wrong
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 10:08:55 AM AEST
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We are not against you dear one, but I'm with the above comment..........please tone it down.
There are so many good people in this world.
We have loving hearts, and we love God still.
It's so obvious to us all that you have a great love for your Lord.........and for that you can be proud, so join us when you write, and don't berate us aloud!
Be kind, and loving, and I know what, please read a poem I wrote... religious I'm not............
I just expressed my feelings..........you can too!
You are a very good poet........
Please keep writing alot!
Warm love,
consue
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Re: Prove me wrong
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 04:00:48 PM AEST
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| I am not trying to berate any one. I just write what the Lord gives me. Not trying to say i am better either |
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