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world harmony
Contributed by
rambo56
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Saturday, 15th May 2010 @ 09:16:08 AM in AEST
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fill the world with peace take away the war
let us live in harmony and have to fight no more
we can live together and we can all unite
and all the wrong we have we can put it right
we can love together and we can love as one
make the world a brighter place and make the world go on
hand in hand together each and every race
we can make the world be a better place.
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Re: world harmony
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by fish on
Saturday, 15th May 2010 @ 10:35:50 AM AEST
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i love the message, it is straight to the point, i love the rhyme scheme too. the best part of this poem is that it is the type of poem the world needs to read at this point in time where harmony is not a choice but a necessity.
nice piece |
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Re: world harmony
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by joe-joe on
Friday, 11th June 2010 @ 02:46:22 PM AEST
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| nice write...we do need harmony, but one must have harmony within his own heart and in his own skin first... |
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