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Waitng in my dreams
Contributed by
bunit682
on
Thursday, 13th May 2010 @ 07:43:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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They say that beauty is only skin deep.
And that's for real.
Cause the most beautiful things in life,
you have to feel, with your heart.
And close your eyes to see.
Things that are only imaginable
like a love between you and me.
If your the earth then I'm a dim star,
Barely visible because I'm so far.
But I wish i could be the sun
So I could bring light to your days.
Your like a broken record that just plays and plays
and its the sweetest melody that I've ever heard
Comparing it to another would be completely absurd.
When I gaze into your eyes I feel like I'm lost at sea.
But I don't want anybody to ever come and rescue me.
If you want conversation,
there's no hesitation.
you have me hanging on every word,
and I feel like a nerd,
the way you've got me studying you,
I cherish the time we spend together,
yes its true.
you stand out in a crowd,
your a beautiful ray of sunshine peeking through a storm cloud.
I've wanted you all along.
Your every beautiful poem, your every love song.
When your near I lose all power.
I would trade anything to spend another hour,
with you.
I don't have a clue.
your the first thing that pops in my head when I wake,
and I don't get a break.
I'm losing sleep so it seems.
Cause I try and stay awake because your waiting in my dreams.
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Re: Waitng in my dreams
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th May 2010 @ 09:26:46 PM AEST
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This is simply beautiful.
Any one that reads it is bound to melt their heart.
Really sweet and tender.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Waitng in my dreams
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by JakerBaker88 on
Friday, 14th May 2010 @ 11:04:05 AM AEST
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| A sweet refreshing poem about unrequited love. I also enjoyed your metaphors and symbolism. My only suggestion would be to break this one up into stanzas. Still, good job! |
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