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of the invisible
Contributed by
ming
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Thursday, 13th May 2010 @ 12:16:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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the nature of air
evident in dark
some peripheral sense
evanesant moments
little more than past
and achingly present
detachment desends
with unexpected clarity
calling serenity
shadows cast
I disappear.
Copyright ©
ming
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2010-05-13 12:16:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: of the invisible
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Friday, 14th May 2010 @ 07:14:42 AM AEST (User
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I would dare to say faith in one's self, is
the most important belief we could adopt.
So sad that most weigh their merit based
on outside opinion. No wonder so many
disappear.
Interesting and quite engaging. -- Achelois
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Re: of the invisible
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Saturday, 15th May 2010 @ 12:50:50 AM AEST (User
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Ephemeral bliss. . .
my dear, sweet ming.
elle :) |
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