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I wonder
Contributed by
chrissylee
on
Wednesday, 12th May 2010 @ 08:04:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When you held me you touched my very soul,
When you kissed me I finally started living,
When we made love it was two souls blending,
Into one utter devine being that would never come untwined.
The moment you touched me I knew you were the one,
Even though you turned away I lived on in hope,
Then unfortunately I moved on,
Only because I thought we had come undone.
I still thought of you so much,
Still wanted us to be ohhh so close,
They say that some often leaves foot prints in your heart,
Believe me you left a stampede in mine.
So often in my day I think of you,
The what if’s the maybe’s and the what might have been’s,
I doubt there is not a moment now during my day that I don’t think,
The way things could have been, the way things should have been.
For all the heart ache I am going through now,
I still wonder do you really love me,
And if you do what happened to us,
And the dream and the way things should be now.
Copyright ©
chrissylee
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2010-05-12 08:04:50]
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Re: I wonder
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by guiltycircles on
Wednesday, 12th May 2010 @ 06:20:11 PM AEST
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| as someone who has recently been left, this really portrays those constant thoughts, and the desire to return to what was once so amazing... nice flow and honesty |
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Re: I wonder
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Thursday, 13th May 2010 @ 06:41:45 AM AEST
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My ultimate fear of getting into a serious relationship, winding up at the heartbreak hotel, i digg the poem, paintd a raw, honest picture of real-life situation in my mind.
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Re: I wonder
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by JimKoz on
Sunday, 15th December 2013 @ 07:03:56 PM AEST
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| I dig this! |
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