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My New Face
Contributed by
guiltycircles
on
Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I will construct a face for you
One that will please you
With lines of laughter, eyes of smiles
I will show no pain, you will want me.
I'll build it from your desires and my lies
No tears of salt shall fall
It shall brighten rooms and make you proud
I will make it faultless, perfection for you
Will you love me then?
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Re: My New Face
(User Rating: 1 ) by navydocny on
Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 04:36:51 PM AEST (User
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Very nice work here...
Very emotional and it deals with the desire to be desired....an extremely compromising position to be in....
Keep up the good work...
Best,
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