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White Boats
Contributed by
windowguy
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Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 11:39:02 PM in AEST
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Broken bread pieces
Swirl on an orange ocean
Stomach stops growling!
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windowguy
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2010-05-10 23:39:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: White Boats
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 12:17:13 AM AEST (User
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Great Haiku!
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Re: White Boats
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Friday, 14th May 2010 @ 08:27:29 AM AEST (User
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soup anyone? lol Of course, now I'm
hungry, thank you very much! :P
Nice haiku! -- Achelois
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