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Life is Breathed
Contributed by
navydocny
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Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 09:53:40 PM in AEST
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None so sweet as made to wait
For her exquisite one time kiss
What more could come, to all but sate?
Enveloped by her seraph bliss
A smile as such is Heaven’s wrought
Flesh and blood in mortal coil
Once gazed upon, my smile is brought
Will make the heart as if to roil
She brings the Maker’s breath to bear
Life unto this dead man’s chest
And brings him dreams of all but err
Melodious thoughts of love’s unrest
Tangible lot, these gifts she brings
Whilst holding me in angelic wings
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2010-05-10 21:53:40]
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Re: Life is Breathed
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 11:15:12 PM AEST
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Beautiful writing.
It's so good to know you're home safe and to see you posting once again.
Take care, friend.
Huggs, smiles,
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Re: Life is Breathed
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by nobodyJQ on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 11:19:13 PM AEST
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that's beautiful, i can almost see it
You surely missed that mate.
great poem all in all |
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Re: Life is Breathed
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by windowguy on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 11:46:55 PM AEST
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| Very good piece. |
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Re: Life is Breathed
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by spud on
Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 01:12:10 PM AEST
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Hi,
Welcome home, Jack!
Trust it wasn't too rough out there?
Your relief is tangible in your poem.
Well written!
Tommy
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Re: Life is Breathed
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th May 2010 @ 09:09:54 PM AEST
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First of all, glad to know that you are safe and sound, Steve. BIG yayness factor for that!!!
Secondly, beeeeeautiful writing!!!!
There was a softness and serenity in this.
Take care,
Tim
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