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A Mother Bird Feeding her Young
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 08:07:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Mother bird finds food,
two beaks connecting as one,
mother-child bond
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2010-05-09 20:07:25]
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Re: A Mother Bird Feeding her Young
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 11:29:07 PM AEST
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| I like the way you worked in a nature haiku (classically haiku) for Mother's Day. I am absolutely positive you have done your Mother proud. Additionally I like that you included that much of motherhood is purely instinctive. She cannot help but nurture, love, and protect her offspring. |
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Re: A Mother Bird Feeding her Young
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 02:19:20 PM AEST
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beautiful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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