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She Stands True
Contributed by
duff
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Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 08:03:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You turned away leaving me to fend
off the cackled lies and cursed tongues,
I died so many times only for you to stand
poised in deceit and deception of reality,
the cold left my lips blue from the winter frost
bestowed by bitters broken circles,
I entrusted you to take care of my heart,
I entrusted you to love me always,
I entrusted you with my life,
I never imagined the force behind
your eyes could break me,
my sweater unraveled by your constant pulling
of my strings left me naked in the fall,
this body still pure from the stand I made against
your increasing tally of virgin exploits,
now morning’s halls echo easy and whore because I
blackened your resume king of kings,
tender years escaped me in the night yet I
remain standing with no one to catch my tears
Copyright ©
duff
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2010-05-09 08:03:52]
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Re: She Stands True
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 08:19:07 AM AEST
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| very powerful. i love the way things are worded. keep writing |
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Re: She Stands True
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 09:16:29 AM AEST
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This staggers me. So much pain, not just in what you've written, but in what was
not said. There are many heartbreaking moments in life, but when we can reflect
and take something from them, all cannot be lost. I adore how much emotion you
capture in this. The anguish nearly devastates me. There are not many writes that
can reduce my heart to pieces. But this? Oh, this SO did. Especially that last line.
D A M N!!
Exceptionally written!! -- Achelois
I love your work.
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Re: She Stands True
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by Debris on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 01:26:28 PM AEST
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| Really nice piece. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: She Stands True
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 10:49:26 PM AEST
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Wow.
That sums this piece up. Well written and deep.
~Bin~
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Re: She Stands True
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 12:50:35 PM AEST
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exquisite, vivid, beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: She Stands True
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 21st May 2010 @ 07:06:10 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! roses at your feet U/E!
Very truthful, straightforward, detailed, and no doubt left for wondering!
Very decisive, riveting, and touching for a heart that is breaking. Yet challenging, and brave!
This is truly great!
Warm love
consue |
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Re: She Stands True
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by TheJMan on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 02:24:49 PM AEST
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| a great write, simply amazing |
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