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Memories
Contributed by
dvsnme816
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Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 11:50:51 PM in AEST
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I been walking the same speed each moment i live,
leaving the past behind-yet in my memories exist,
never had a family growing up-it's hard being alone,
been suicidal-lost some blood-and often lost hope,
until i had my baby-first moment i looked in her eyes,
tears fell to the ground with bad memories inscribed,
like a crystal ball-each tear shows life with every second,
then it hits the ground and my life feels like its mended,
never been happier with life-i feel gods watching above,
my baby smiles with her gums-i never been more in love...
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Re: Memories
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 12:03:03 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful write.
I don't see any thing wrong.
Congratulations on your new love. You're right there's nothing to compare with the love of a child.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Memories
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by northernlights on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 02:43:46 AM AEST
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| Troubles melt with the emergence of a new bond of love so strong its indescribable,I know that joy well written |
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