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Contributed by
Chamaron
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Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 07:34:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A new home now
Doesn't feel like home
A mattress and a hairbrush
To make me feel belonging
A change in dynamic
Without resentment
No bitter with the sweet
A startover and a borrow
A goodbye to original
A tradeup to different
There never was
Here isn't quite
A heart in self-made exile
A search premature
It'll all be okay
Because home is a handbag
I carry around
Place to place
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2010-05-08 19:34:49]
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Re: Home
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 09:15:30 PM AEST
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A bit sad but great writing.
Good luck,
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Home
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by lesoleilnoire on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 09:51:03 PM AEST
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Great poem. New beginnings are very hard. I find the last few lines sum up the poem well. This poem has an element of sorrow in it. I wish you the best, and hopefully one day you will have a different and happier definition of home. Powerful write!
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