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two daffodils
Contributed by
rambo56
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Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 05:13:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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two little daffodils sat up on a hill
standing there so proudly standing very still
with there yellow flowers standing out so bright
underneath the sun sending out the light
surrounded by the grass growing all around
with there long green stork protruding from the ground
they looked very beautiful such a lovely thing
standing there so pretty to let us know its spring.
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rambo56
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2010-05-08 17:13:08]
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Re: two daffodils
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by Nevilleconnie on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 06:04:05 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful poem. Brought a smile to my face. Great job. I always enjoy reading your poems. |
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Re: two daffodils
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by lesoleilnoire on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 10:06:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful imagery here. It brightened my day!
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Re: two daffodils
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 05:02:45 AM AEST
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| cool poem |
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