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Unfinished Song
Contributed by
CiCi2011
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Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 10:35:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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She wakes up every morning and paints the smile on her face.
She dresses to kill with every hair in place.
They all see the image- the life of perfection,
But nobody notices the sinking depression.
She sees where it's going; she knows that it's wrong.
But how does she let go of what she's held for so long?
She fears what they'll say, and if they'll accept her.
She fears that her dreams will go down in disaster.
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CiCi2011
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2010-05-08 10:35:23]
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Re: Unfinished Song
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by sahuvivekanand on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 11:11:21 AM AEST
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| very good try , i think u succeed in what u wanna express. |
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Re: Unfinished Song
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by Chamaron on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 05:30:52 PM AEST
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| Brilliant. I can relate. Expressed perfectly. |
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Re: Unfinished Song
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by Nevilleconnie on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 06:17:36 PM AEST
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| Very raw emotions here. While it's depressing, there's no denying the fact that you did an excellent job with writing it. I wish you the best of luck. |
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Re: Unfinished Song
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 04:59:12 AM AEST
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| cool poem |
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