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dancing angels
Contributed by
rambo56
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Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 04:45:23 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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i walked in to a church and watched a candle glow
burning very brighty burning very slow
while staring at the candle i went in to a daze
and saw two angels dancing in the middle of the haze
they were very peaceful dancing in the cloud
as i sat watched i felt so very proud.
the angels they were happy so very bright and gay
and as the candle lost its light the angels flew away
i wont forget the candle and the angels that i saw
oneday i will return again and watch them dance once more
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Re: dancing angels
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 05:49:28 PM AEST
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Beautiful and very delightful.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: dancing angels
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by Nevilleconnie on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 06:05:18 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful poem. I love the way you write. Fantastic job. I could almost see the angels dancing myself, that's how good your descriptions were. |
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Re: dancing angels
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 8th May 2010 @ 01:26:12 AM AEST
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| Great imgery,there is something very mystical about candle flame and you have added the spiritual element,together with the simplistic imagery creates an escape to another world well written |
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