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An angels nightmare
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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My wings are torn,
My halo broken,
My heart filled with mourn,
to the pain that was awoken,
Bid my blood to run,
make the pain go away,
has my life come undone,
will I ever see the day,
As I fell to the floor,
Tear drops from my eyes
started to pour,
Running away from the
nothingness inside of me,
wondering if I'll ever be free,
SAVE ME! I yell over and over
again and again,
Suddenly I wake in your arms,
still crying from the grief,
"It was just a dream"
What a relief.
Copyright ©
youngpoet1989
... [
2003-04-14 08:05:00]
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 08:06:31 AM AEST
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What an imagination but I liked this makes you think Angels dont have it easy either!
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 08:14:54 AM AEST
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| what a relief... imaginative little poem... blessings... |
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by shelby on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 09:16:26 AM AEST
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beautiful poem. I got lost in it.
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 10:49:46 AM AEST
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Great poem - I really liked the uniqueness of the theme. Great work
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 12:28:15 PM AEST
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| awww poor little angel! i bet she said,"phew!" hugs nessa |
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by BlackFire9786 on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 08:58:57 PM AEST
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| A unique poem, I like it.....angels may not have it any better than humans.... |
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by Chase on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 11:24:24 PM AEST
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| Were You listening to Evanescence when you wrote this? lol |
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by youngpoet1989 on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 07:01:22 PM AEST
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| No, I wasn't listening to evanescence when I wrote this, but I like there music. |
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 09:20:40 PM AEST
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I liked this one alot also, good job,
Jeff |
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by nikkie on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 06:53:03 PM AEST
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| I like this kind of poem cuz it makes u think...sum ppl don' really have it as easy as sum others....Gret poem!! Nikkie |
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by nikkie on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 06:53:11 PM AEST
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| I like this kind of poem cuz it makes u think...sum ppl don't really have it as easy as sum others....Gret poem!! Nikkie |
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by InteruptedFate on
Tuesday, 1st July 2003 @ 04:14:54 PM AEST
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| I like this poem alot. Its very creative. I think you have alot of talent. |
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Re: An angels nightmare
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 04:58:39 PM AEST
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| uhh..it sounds like evanessence!! lol |
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