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a hike in the woods
Contributed by
wordmusefindme
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Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 06:07:29 AM in AEST
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I aim to write a happy poem
accomplished this before
enlighten mood sooth the soul
bring you in the door
when i want an upward lift
i step outside and see
the mountains green in the distance
grey cliff and green tree
the sun behind rolling grey clouds
promise rain is on the way
greens are darker than before
with shadows and other light play
birds of every color and shape
continue their rite of spring
animals scurry out of my view
i do not say a thing
I walk and drink the action in
as though it is a play
how easy to visit this place
how tough would be to stay
my lungs breath in the cool damp air
my mind becomes relaxed
my heart is in love with this place
a bear jumps out and attacks
eeeyyaa! I scream hold up my arms
pretend i am the bigger foe
It does not sense my fear inside
I hope it doesn't show
thirty seconds tick off the clock
as we stand there face to face
Black bear decides i am not worth the pain
walks away from that place
my feet are brisk against the ground
get back to the parking lot
the adrenaline has my mind a buzz
what could be and could not
i calm again after some deep breaths
a sparkle comes to my eye
i stumbled into a sacred place
he was as scared as I
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Re: a hike in the woods
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by DarkWolf on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 08:22:57 AM AEST
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| very nice write |
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Re: a hike in the woods
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 09:04:05 AM AEST
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well woven tale, beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: a hike in the woods
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by Nevilleconnie on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 12:11:15 PM AEST
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| A wonderful poem full of beautiful descriptions. Great job. |
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Re: a hike in the woods
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 11:31:25 PM AEST
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Thanks for this it made me smile.
Lovely vivid images, flowing lovely write, just like the nature you speak of ohhhhhh beautiful!
Michelle |
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Re: a hike in the woods
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by spud on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 07:59:11 AM AEST
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Hi,
Just as well he was as scared as you!!
A walk on the wild side! Thank you!
Tommy
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Re: a hike in the woods
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 9th February 2011 @ 10:50:24 PM AEST
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Awesome, that's about like me a few nights back.
I open the door and let out oreo, my dog out she's big. Stinky's little but bad to the bone.
They went to the end of the house next to my bedroom, I'm standing on the the deck and something went flying down the road in front of my house heading out the driveway to the main road out side my yard. I swear I never saw it touch the ground and that's about 100 or so yards to the Lane. It ways a mountain lion. I knew it was around but that's the first time I saw it.
I'd been wondering who or what was causing my dogs to go nuts.
Oh sorry, great write.
blessings,
emy |
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