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wildfire
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 10:54:18 PM in AEST
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a nice non dream comfy sleep when i smelled smoke
not much to concern me people use woodstoves up here,
so i turned over and went back into heavy sleep; but
my dogs began barking in a high pitched scary way,
i thought maybe we were being trespassed on, robbed....
so i woke up and as i rubbed my eyes the smoke smell was so strong,
i wondered why someone was burning anything, it was not cold out
the winds were extreme as well, almost rocking the house
my little boxer heidi barked madeningly, my mastiff hulk
woofed like he was caught under something calling for help
i looked out the windows, didn't see anything strange
still the mad barking, so i went to the end of the house and
looked out the window, across the pasture rolling directly towards
us was a wall of flames! no less than fifty feet away, a raging wildfire!
omg omg omg omg omg omg i called 911
still not all the way awake i moved by fear, adrenalin
firemen, forest rangers, and trucks were everywhere,
at least thirty vehicles worked and still the fire raged
it wrapped around us in the most terrifying experience of my life
on blew the damn wind, feeding it, fanning it, kissing the flames
the embers jumped through the air multiplying it; before long we
all were engulfed by the wildfire, men using water from trucks
as if they had garden hoses, not much helped; we were trapped
the fire now easily 50 ft high moved and the winds gave not a break,
twelve feet from blowing us all away the wind changed and
the men put out that area, barely it missed our propane tank
i phoned my kids and parents; said goodbye i love you; just in case...
rangers and firefighters put out the small fires but this fire burned on
by the grace of god or the universe my dogs and i were spared,
but the truth is they saved our lives; woofing until i saw it
it burned our eyes, we couldn't breathe, then bulldozers came in
making a 'fire ring' ....i was asurred we would be safe, of course
then with the winds; two nights later it was out of control again,
unbelievably, -at first the fire rescue and forestry didn't believe me,
'there's a fire ring mame don't worry, the fire won't jump out'
well, wrong, i surely thought we were going to die, by this
time i had not slept for days and eerily there were no birds,
no wildlife sounds of any sort for these long five days
it was creepy scary, the second time my property was
'saved' they actually put out the fire in the fire ring,
so now we are all safe and sound, the resiliance of nature
astounds me; new bright green growth over woods and pastures
the dogs snore again whilst sleeping, the birds have returned
the frightening moments forgotten by all the world of nature
but me, i cannot forget, for the first time in my life i am afraid
of the woods i so love, the endless skies tease me with beauty
breezes and winds say to me like a mantra move move move move
leave leave leave leave move move move move get away get away
i sit here like a gaurdian, a watcher, a silent sentry, my skin crawls,
everytime i'm away anciety fills me until i return seeing home intact
hearing the dogs say hello, i love you, welcome back! biskets?
i'm going to go, no place is worth death whilst sleeping
any day now i will get the nerve to put it up for sale,
my heart is torn, my mind is blown, my soul in tatters.
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Ramones - Have You Ever Seen The Rain Mp3
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ladyfawn
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 11:22:13 PM AEST (User
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Thank God for sparing you in Jesus name, amen!
Did someone do it on purpose?
I know how you love your home and the woods.
Is some one trying to force you to leave?
Awesome writing even tho it's very sad.
Talk to me, please?.
I'm always here for you, girlfriend.
luv, huggs, prayer,peace, hope, joy,
emy |
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 11:31:58 PM AEST (User
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thank you emy girl; no nobody after me! lol, thankfully! what happened was someone threw away a ciggarette and when he looked behind him the forest was ablaze, it was accidental, although so careless on this neighbors part,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 01:31:34 AM AEST (User
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Oh Nessa I mirror Emy, thank God!
My heart is still pounding while reading this.
I am so glad you and the furbabies and your home were spared.
Fire scares me.........
We had a fire here Easter Sunday and that was way to close for me, our neighbors place went up , another neighbor had to jump off the second story balcony with his cat, it was awful. Everyone was ok but homes lost.
The wildfires take on a head all their own dont they? I was close to a couple of them as well few years back......
Hugssssssssss
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by wordmusefindme on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 04:45:04 AM AEST (User
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Wow! Animals are amazing and smart. The stress and anxiety must have been intense.Hopefully it passed , like the fire. Sad.
but fortunate for you to be warned, act rationally in a time when you needed to. I wish you luck to decide "Should I stay or should I go". It is hard to run from stupid human mistakes on this planet. :) |
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 02:24:47 PM AEST (User
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Oh Nessa dear.
Please don't move out of fear. I know how you and your critters love that place.......how could you ever replace it with another space!
Bless your heart, you're such a wonderful writer. I was frozen to my desktop......I'm just glad you and yours were saved.
Tragic story..........but please don't put it up for sale............Bet your kids don't want you to either.
Wonderful writing dear!
Thank God for your little critters........they saved you through it all!
Warm love
consue |
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 08:22:47 AM AEST (User
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Nessa, what a frightening experience for you! I can't even imagine going through
something like that, and all because of the carelessness of someone. I just can't
believe that with all the knowledge out there, someone would still be so flippant about
something as crucial as tossing a cigarette in the woods. What was he thinking?
I'm just so happy you and your loving animals are safe. I hope that you can eventually lose
the anxiety that this ordeal has created in your heart. It would be sad for you to have to move
away. :( Thank you for sharing this.
You take care!
::hugs hugs hugs::
-- Achelois
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by nigmart on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 11:30:52 AM AEST (User
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I think my heart stopped when I read this through, such pace, vision, intensity. We are not worthy dear Lady, what a breathtaking piece of literature. Nigmart. |
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 01:27:09 AM AEST (User
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Nessa, I am so sorry I missed this.
You convey the emotion of fear so well here it put me on edge. It would probably take me a long time to get over something like that too. Goodness, the anxiety you refer to. I think, yes, your dogs saved your lives. Yayness for dogs!!!!! So, glad you're still with us.
Tim
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 02:59:38 AM AEST (User
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Oh, Nessa..it is breath taking and a very pathetic incident..Thank God you are safe.. Great description..50 feet high wild fire wall.. every thing burnt around.
It may be painful to leave the place..but your life is precious my friend...God bless you.take care..
Hugs and love :-) yours venkat |
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by Voices-Ghost on
Saturday, 1st March 2014 @ 08:55:13 PM AEST (User
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WOW! I am VERY thankful that you are safe after this and your pets too. Memories of a place will always be memories no matter what. Your life is much more important.
Hugs My Friend.
Voice's Ghost
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th May 2014 @ 09:37:55 PM AEST (User
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Oh, so scary! Thankfully your dogs alerted you. One of many reasons I will always have a dog (or two).
Have you moved?
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinb on
Friday, 4th July 2014 @ 03:50:48 PM AEST (User
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animals are always our best friends i have 2 dogs myself that have kept me away from danger a few times |
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Re: wildfire
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinb on
Friday, 4th July 2014 @ 03:50:52 PM AEST (User
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animals are always our best friends i have 2 dogs myself that have kept me away from danger a few times |
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