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funny dream
Contributed by
rambo56
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Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 04:09:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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i had a funny dream of castles in the air
with lots of little dragons flying everywhere
there was lots of fairies with a magic wand
with a great big goldfish swimming in a pond
there was a little unicorn he came passing bye
flying there above me in the bright blue sky
there was a little turtle giving out a glow
shining very brightly walking very slow
i saw lots of creatures with colors oh so bright
just to watch them crawl filled me with delight
this was just a dream a vision that i had
it made me oh so happy and very very glad.
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rambo56
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2010-05-05 16:09:23]
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Re: funny dream
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by shanat on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 04:49:19 PM AEST
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| i thought this was so fantastic ive voted for it twice:)) shanat. |
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Re: funny dream
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by hanasuru on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 05:19:49 PM AEST
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| it was cute, made me grin :D |
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Re: funny dream
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by Nevilleconnie on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 07:10:04 PM AEST
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| This is such a beautiful poem. The way you wrote it made me feel like I was there. An amazing job. Such a happy poem. I wish I had dreams like this. |
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Re: funny dream
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by aliopterix on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 09:16:16 PM AEST
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| This was a hugely fun read. Well done - and be vary wary of those funny looking mushrooms! Aliopterix. |
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