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Melting of the Sun
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 10:13:59 AM in AEST
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Melting of the Sun
There resides within my heart a passion that burns as hot as the sun
A match for this had not been seen until I met this special one
Drawing back the shades that kept it hidden from the worlds view
I let it shine and flourish at times, not wanting it to be too much for you
What I discovered recently is that you were absorbing those feelings deep inside
Not revealing that you held a powerful passion also, yet from the world you did hide
Glimpses of your power you have graced me to see
Have each time caused me to fall to my knees
What I believed burned inside me to be a solitary element lost in time
You have taken and joined with yours melting them into one, pure and fine
The longing and desire that was found to be in my eyes
Is just the surface of the well, for it is as vast as the skies
Deadwriter
05/04/2010
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Re: Melting of the Sun
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by Nevilleconnie on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 11:16:23 AM AEST
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| A beautifully written poem. Hope to read more from you. |
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Re: Melting of the Sun
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 12:24:00 PM AEST
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truly beautiful, my friend, and i love the last line:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Melting of the Sun
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 02:07:54 PM AEST
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Awwww B... this is so sweet... Beautifully
written.
Thank you for sharing this....
Big Hug....
Jenni |
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Re: Melting of the Sun
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by duff on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 09:34:49 PM AEST
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What a wonderful write that stimulates the heart with so much feeling and emotion. This was a pleasure to read and thank you for sharing.
U/E |
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Re: Melting of the Sun
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th May 2010 @ 09:28:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful!
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Michelle |
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