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Giving Up
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 06:14:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Harder comes my every breath.
I find it hard to live.
I don’t know how much time is left,
Until I throw a fit.
I do not wish to go insane.
I do not wish to snap.
I can not live each single day,
Inside my twisted past.
I do not wish to hurt the one’s,
I said I’d always love.
I know I would by giving up.
My parents would be crushed.
Yet how I wish to end my life,
My fears and all my doubts.
every night I always cry,
And all I see are clouds.
No excuse can justify,
The way I’ve come to be
There are no words to clarify,
This drastic change in me.
Insults echo loud and clear.
Their voices never cease.
All you bullies, give a cheer.
You surely did succeed.
I write this poem for those who care.
For those I truly love.
Please don’t shed a single tear.
I love you all so much.
Copyright ©
Nevilleconnie
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2010-05-04 18:14:49]
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Re: Giving Up
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 01:06:50 PM AEST
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in this beautifully expressed poem, i'm so sorry you are feeling down like this, i want to wrap my arms around you in a hug, hang in there; life is worth seeing what happens next,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Giving Up
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by BLUESOUL1313 on
Sunday, 9th May 2010 @ 01:09:17 AM AEST
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| NO ONE KNOWS WHAT LIFE HOLDS. I HELPS TO PEOPLE ARE NOT ALONE. |
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Re: Giving Up
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by rambo56 on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 08:58:16 AM AEST
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| love this poem good write keep writing |
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