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KEEP DREAMING YOU ARE MINE
Contributed by
pooja
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Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 09:13:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are in that corner you sit every day
My halting steps are headed your way
Oh..There are things I know I should say
Still right now silence seems fine...
Everytime I find a lonely moment with you
My mouth goes dry and those words don't come through
Oh...i know just what I should do
But I keep buying time...
And I am sure I am on the right track
Still I don't know what's holding me back
Oh... why don't you give me a sign
Until then I'll keep dreaming you are mine
You light up my life just by walking through my door
We say so much but what goes unsaid is more
Oh...I know this heartache has but one cure
But I can't seem to leave all that fear behind...
Do you feel the same when you are looking at me
Like my heart does ur heart skips every other beat
Oh...am I just seeing what I want to see
Right now silence is such a crime
I have heard true love comes just once your way
And yet i am missing this chance i get every day
Oh why don't you read this unfinished line
Or should I keep dreaming u r mine ?
Now suddenly I feel my doubts disappear
Its the ending of that something I had feared
Now there is not a moment to lose
For I have run out of every excuse...
so here I am with my heart by your side
You shall know what I have been keeping inside
In my heart I know it'll be different this time
Coz I don't wanna just dream that u r mine
I will not just dream that u r mine...
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pooja
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2010-05-04 09:13:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: KEEP DREAMING YOU ARE MINE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nevilleconnie on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 10:58:46 AM AEST (User
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An amazingly beautiful poem. The fear and the need to say what you feel is written wonderfully in this poem. Once again, great job. |
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Re: KEEP DREAMING YOU ARE MINE
(User Rating: 1 ) by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 12:43:38 PM AEST (User
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Awsome write so touching such a thing called love, quote: why dont you read this unfinished line, I enjoyed this so much,
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Re: KEEP DREAMING YOU ARE MINE
(User Rating: 1 ) by tjmontanagirl on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 01:23:56 PM AEST (User
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gorgeous write :)
i loved it, very easy to read.!
i love the rhyming.
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Re: KEEP DREAMING YOU ARE MINE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Breezy on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 04:38:01 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful sentiments in a delicate rapture of emotion.
Oh, wouldl that we had the courage to do what we
dare. Life would find itself more clearly defined and
dare I say, more explained. I love the flow of this. It is
so soft and breezy. Just a beautiful write. :)
Lovely words ... -- Achelois
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