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Feelings Set Free
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
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Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 06:17:52 AM in AEST
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I’m not the type to beg and plead.
But please oh please come back to me.
Without you here, I am a wreck.
There are few tears that go unshed.
And when all tears fall from my eye’s,
I’ll know it’s time to say goodbye.
That’s why I try to hold them back.
Cause I’m afraid to lose the past.
The past was filled with hate and blood.
But hate was overruled by love.
The love you gave made me survive.
And you’re the reason I’m alive.
A love so strong it conquered hate.
I only hope I’m not to late.
I need to see your deep brown eye’s.
I need you here, rite by my side.
I’m sorry that I’m torn and weak.
I’m sorry I could not come clean.
It’s been my weakness all my life.
I can not voice what’s deep inside.
I’ll fight with all I know and have,
To find a way to get you back.
It’s time I take the dangerous leap.
To tell you things I’ve hidden deep.
And even if I’m met with grieve.
I’ll know I set my feelings free.
Copyright ©
Nevilleconnie
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2010-05-04 06:17:52]
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Re: Feelings Set Free
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by ammar on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 07:55:29 AM AEST
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A good effort.
This was an example of how effectively poetry can be used to convey feelings.
Peace
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Re: Feelings Set Free
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 12:18:22 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! Nevilleconnie.
Roses at your feet!
This poem was so emotional, romantic, riveting, and deep!
Your choice of words took a great leap.
From begging to pleading, to coming clean.
Everything else was riveting.........inbetween,
You have lots of talent, and I'm so glad to welcome you to YPDC
You're going to love it here.......you'll see!
Keep up the good work
Warm love
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Re: Feelings Set Free
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 04:02:59 PM AEST
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it's not always good to bottle things up, there comes a point when it's just too much. I can relate to your struggle. this is indeed full of heavy untold emotion, and it flowed so wonderfully at the same time. keep writing, hope to read more...
take care
-K.Z. |
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