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breath of the muse. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 11:33:05 PM in AEST
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your heart shines like a blackhole sun. . . so there be shadows. . .
prostrate, in harsh light, with each new gift of understanding
drained & subjugate,
your eyes cry tearless words. . .
& I am soothed, by your trust. . .
by your displacement. . . by your exhaustion
your hedron fountain, overflows
& I am at once your slave
& master. . .
an amethyst caldron
a siphon. . . a pledge. . .
I rebuke as you expose the atmosphere
of what I do not know & do not want to
but it is there, plain
spilling from this pen. . .
tongue of my muse
your language spins cobwebs,
brightly. . .
I can not hold the breath that you take. . .
your dark horse, forever beneath me
your dark sky arriving as the lover
in the waning light, breathless. . .
to devour
a hush, overtaken by your sighs. . .
forgives. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2010-05-03 23:33:05]
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Re: breath of the muse. . .
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by Breezy on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 06:41:10 AM AEST
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Oh elle, how perfectly described.
I especially loved this,
"... I am at once your slave
& master..."
How perfectly brilliant! Your work
always moves me beyond the
capacity for articulation.
Exceptional post!! -- Achelois
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Re: breath of the muse. . .
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by duff on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 09:41:53 PM AEST
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A beautiful piece of writing you have here. Tranquil and flowing from line to line making this easy on the eyes with some stunning imagery. Well done
U/E
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Re: breath of the muse. . .
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by venkat on
Sunday, 23rd May 2010 @ 10:20:38 PM AEST
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"tongue of my muse, your language spins cobwebs, brightly"..
These cobwebs are shining with morning dew reflecting various colors of your emotional feelings...
very beautiful my friend.:-) venkat
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