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Broken Toothpicks
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 06:53:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Tired eyes close shut,
toothpicks prying them open,
breaking suddenly
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-05-03 18:53:04]
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Re: Broken Toothpicks
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 07:06:38 PM AEST
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a perfect haiku, yeuch! that would hurt tho!
hugs n' love nessa
ps lol at your note |
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Re: Broken Toothpicks
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by Breezy on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 07:09:30 PM AEST
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I love Tom and Jerry! lol This was fun and
eerily familiar! :P Nice one. ^_^
-- Achelois
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Re: Broken Toothpicks
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 12:27:00 AM AEST
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| can see that cartoon clip in my head lol well written |
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