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love.me.not
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 04:04:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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leave me waking and hollow;
this sunrise is nothing
without your dreamless breath
filling me.
i realized the moon had made you its child -
and i remained your miserable creature
wishing to be the soil you melted in constantly.
the mirror speaks without discretion.
i must die today.
i accept the possibility of fading from your heart.
i accept you never waiting for my tragic ghost.
my arms wrap around the silence
just as a martyr
embraces flame;
i do not listen for your voice for salvation.
i am patient;
i rid my skin of its layers with a mother's touch
smiling softly,
sad and sympathetic as the fat presents itself;
the sleeping muscles;
the threads of vein pulsing gently.
buddhists speak calmly from my fingertips,
nirvana carved into mortal viscera,
bathed in sacred vermillion.
fleshless,
i am reminded of the sunsets we never died in.
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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Re: love.me.not
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 04:08:20 PM AEST
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wow, truly exquisite write there my friend,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: love.me.not
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 12:04:37 PM AEST
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Random thought: Don't you worry bout two left feet. Shake it up!!!! Okay seriously now...
This wasn't the easiest poem for me to read...people dying...I do not deal well with death. However, with that said it speaks how well you can write!!! Powerfully well! Something that can cause the reader that much emotion spells success. |
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Re: love.me.not
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by ming on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 01:38:15 PM AEST
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Your writings take my breath and send my brain in twists and dreams. I am reading ALL of your poetry and am inspired. :)
ming |
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