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* THE SPRING TIME *
Contributed by
venkat
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Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 08:27:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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In the spring, my feelings
Blossomed as fragrant flowers,
While watching the tree tops in the woods
Which were brushing the canvas of the sky
Where clouds were rolling with big strides,
My mind turned into a sweet melody -
At evening, the breeze blew eddying it self into
A heart rending wail as the last bubbles of twilight
Burst and merged into the spreading darkness;
I leaned against the broken wall of a way side inn
And rested my head marveling at the sweetness
Of solitude, I enjoyed in the woods..
~*~
When the intense fragrance of flowers that
Bloomed some where in the forest caressed
Me in a warm and hearty embrace of breeze,
When a pair of birds softly cooing while
Sharing a mysterious joy in the nearby trees,
I felt how blessed was the life on this earth
And, when I started to sing like a cuckoo
In such a blissful mood, all of a sudden
I was shocked to hear a piercing shriek of pain:
The scream of a hapless bird in the throes of death.
Who was the hunter? whom should I curse?-
Though I wondered like a sage, yet
I could not suppress my tears!
~*~
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Re: * THE SPRING TIME *
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 11:26:41 PM AEST
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Incredible writing as always.
You tell the story of Spring so well.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: * THE SPRING TIME *
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by Nevilleconnie on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 05:28:53 AM AEST
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| Wow, the descriptions in this poem are beautiful. This was a great pleasure to read. Great job. |
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Re: * THE SPRING TIME *
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by elle on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 06:47:45 AM AEST
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Dear venkat,
This is simply a beautiful verse. . . encompassing both one stark, wee tragedy of nature & the bittersweet throes of life, on the luckiest planet,
the blue marble, Earth. Such is the duality of the universe. I am humbled & blessed to be a part of it. A wonderful write, my friend. Bliss.
elle :) |
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Re: * THE SPRING TIME *
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 10:36:08 AM AEST
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loverly poem.
Thanks for sharing:) |
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Re: * THE SPRING TIME *
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 10:47:09 AM AEST
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beautiful written, exquisitely alive, you are brilliant writer who never disappoints my friend,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: * THE SPRING TIME *
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 11:55:42 AM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! Rose at your feet my friend VenKat.........how wonderful to read your inspiring and heartfelt poems again. I didn't realize you were still posting.
Like yours, my heart aches when a sparrow falls, and so does Gods!
This poem was so touching, and I enjoyed it so much.
Good to read your beautiful words again Venkat.......keep up the good work!
Warm love
lovingcritters
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