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Misty Moon Beams
Contributed by
willofree
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Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 09:01:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Spell bound, the lovers stood squeezing one another's hand.
Through teary eyes they gazed at the loveliness of the full moon,
and were speechless as they observed the misty moon above.
Awestruck by the splendor of God's design,
they clung together in mesmerized wonder.
The lovers humbly contemplated their connection
to the mystery of moon and love.
With nervous emotion they reveled in their dreams
seeking confirmation and comfort from one another,
as lovers often do.
They felt connected to the misty moon rising in the sky,
hoping love will not pass them by.
Yet for those romancing, dreams are revealed.
The lovers stared into the clandestine sky
only to find how quickly time passes by
as they ponder the essence of time and love.
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willofree
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2010-05-02 09:01:21]
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Re: Misty Moon Beams
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 09:17:56 AM AEST
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vivid imagery, like a peek into two lives,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Misty Moon Beams
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by joydeep_nath on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 09:27:26 AM AEST
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| beautifully written |
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Re: Misty Moon Beams
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 04:12:42 PM AEST
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This is truly beautiful. Your words are so soft and
delicate--they truly capture the essence of a love
that stands through time, however quickly it passes.
There is something so ethereal about this write.
Almost like a dream, floating on the wind, spreading
it's beauty across the land. Just so stunning!
Excellent post! -- Achelois
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Re: Misty Moon Beams
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 11:52:54 PM AEST
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One can feel the beauty in this amazing write.
It's like the reader is part of this awesome write.
huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy.
it's good to see a post from you. |
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Re: Misty Moon Beams
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th August 2010 @ 05:24:17 PM AEST
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Anything seems possible under the moon, doesn't it?
This is sweet, and magical, and it stirred up such warm thoughts as I was reading along. This part especially is wonderful:
Awestruck by the splendor of God's design,
they clung together in mesmerized wonder.
The lovers humbly contemplated their connection
to the mystery of moon and love.
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