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The Platform
Contributed by
daggers
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Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 10:47:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a deserted platform
haunted by emotions released
listen....
lovers parting and romance reuniting
the fear of stepping out
to a strange new town
sadness and greif
hearts all but breaking
and the embrace of long lost friends
i kick a stone on my way to the platform
its echoes are drowned
by the whispering ghosts
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2010-05-01 10:47:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Platform
(User Rating: 1 ) by aliopterix on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 06:32:17 AM AEST (User
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its echoes are drowned
by the whispering ghosts
I loved this quotation. Very nice write. Aliopterix. |
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