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Year in a day: From a watcher
Contributed by
RitalinKid
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Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 05:57:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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And a lifetime it takes, building memories, make. With the rate of the high tide approaching its' wake.
And Sandcastles crumble to mud. And the sun dries the beaches.
And Tomorrow morning: Another youthful year in a day will fill the coast with castles and buckets and sand.
And Mom and Dad watch with hope as blue as the sea.
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Re: Year in a day: From a watcher
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 09:44:14 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem a great deal. I love the imagery used here and the metaphor is effective.
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Re: Year in a day: From a watcher
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by northernlights on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 11:49:53 PM AEST
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| Great concept and perfect imagery well written |
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Re: Year in a day: From a watcher
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by RitalinKid on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 04:48:05 AM AEST
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| Thank you both so much! |
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Re: Year in a day: From a watcher
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by NightMareShoGun on
Sunday, 2nd June 2013 @ 08:06:49 PM AEST
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| nicely done |
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