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Inside-Out or Outside-In
Contributed by
unknownlegend
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Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 02:01:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sometimes I wish I were Outside-In then I could really see
I would see what others do and see what's truly me
Cause if i could go Inside-Out and then go back again
Would I like the view as others do ....... or then go Outside-In?
What side would I really like? Which would I like to be?
The one who shows what's in my heart, for that is really me.
The world would rather Outside-Out than Inside-out to be
For what's inside they'd rather hide, what is outside to see
If they would take a little time, look Inside-Out of me
They would find a precious prize that outside can't be seen
Be it Inside-Out or Outside-In it's all the same you see
What difference does it make to some ........ How they are judging me?
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unknownlegend
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2010-04-30 14:01:30]
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Re: Inside-Out or Outside-In
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by Nevilleconnie on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 03:07:08 PM AEST
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| A really great poem. I enjoyed reading this a lot. The message is clear and very true. Wonderful job. |
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Re: Inside-Out or Outside-In
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by JakerBaker88 on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 03:23:34 PM AEST
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| An interesting take on a person's desire to be understood etc. Also a good example of how we view ourselves as opposed to how others view us. Nice work here. |
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Re: Inside-Out or Outside-In
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 12:18:29 AM AEST
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| See what's truly me.... our constant longing for acceptance,perhaps while we are ignoring our essential need for self acceptance, great way of looking at this well written |
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Re: Inside-Out or Outside-In
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2014 @ 07:05:13 PM AEST
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personally i would show them my back-side
hugs n' love nessa |
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