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United with Death
Contributed by
delerioustearz
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Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The only time I stick up my chin,
Is when that blade slides across my skin.
The blood of mine falls like rain
And overflows like a river through my vein
It sings to me this blood of mine
Saying rythmycally I will be fine
It beats with melody I have a few seconds left...
Here I am united with Death.
Copyright ©
delerioustearz
... [
2003-04-14 00:45:00]
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Re: United with Death
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 06:31:17 AM AEST
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A very short poem but still very powerful. I like your writing style.
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Re: United with Death
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 02:06:50 AM AEST
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owerful write
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Re: United with Death
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 02:07:03 AM AEST
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powerful write
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Re: United with Death
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by full_blur on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 01:51:50 PM AEST
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owerful write
sorry, i'm a sucker for symmetry even in comments
anyway, your description of a beating heart and the dialogue with it is fantastic! |
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