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mystical night
Contributed by
texas_tgirl
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Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 05:10:00 PM in AEST
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a mystical night that should last forever...but will it
sometimes i imagine laying on the beach
the ocean waves are crashing up against the rocks
there is a cool light breeze blowing across my face
the moon is bright, illuminating the ocean after the sun has faded away
the sand feels cool beneath my feet. there is somebody laying beside me
holding my hand, i turn my head to see who it is but they disappear
only to reappear on the other side holding my hand.
i guess im not suppose to know who it is...yet
a mystical dream that should last forever...never to end
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Re: mystical night
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by Nevilleconnie on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 05:33:41 AM AEST
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| This poem was a pleasure to read. It held so much longing. You also wrote beautiful descriptions and details. |
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Re: mystical night
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by texas_tgirl on
Sunday, 2nd May 2010 @ 11:22:53 PM AEST
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| thank you connie |
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