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Save me from the Sea
Contributed by
619Prisoner
on
Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 09:11:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She looks up
Reaching for me
Begging with her eyes
“take me from this sea!”
Tis a sea of chaos
Full of uncertainty
A dark stormy place
In which we cannot be
Reality and fantasy
One in the same
What can we do
In this everlasting game.
Our souls shine bright
Dancing in the night sky
Looking down at us fool
Probably wondering why
Shine with me
Forget your life
One day we’re going to be free
And you shall be my wife
Freed from the sea
Our love is now set
So much stronger now
Than when we first met
Lets look back
On this bright day
Remember no matter what
We had our way
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619Prisoner
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2010-04-29 09:11:03]
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Re: Save me from the Sea
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by DarkWolf on
Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 09:52:44 AM AEST
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| nice write on finding a fish in a sea of fish |
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Re: Save me from the Sea
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 12:10:07 PM AEST
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Yes, life is a symphony of storm
tossed seas, but in the end
still waters prevail. Very good!
Blessings,
Rob |
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Re: Save me from the Sea
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 05:29:56 PM AEST
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very pretty and sweet, beautifully romantic,
hugs n' love nessa |
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