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Tears

Contributed by Ju-Ju on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I lay in my bed
crying my eyes out
trying to figure this out
on what this was all about?
I know you didn’t mean to hurt me,
you were just kidding,
but still I lay here
confused and thinking.
Why did you do this to me?
This pain is getting stronger,
and now I wish I didn’t know you
for any longer.
The bruises all over my body
are now becoming part of my skin,
and I don’t know
how I could let you win.
I shouldn’t have let you touch me.
I’m not your toy!
And now your going to regret doing this,
oh boy!
The problem is
your going to do it tomorrow and the next.
I swear your not going to get away with this
until I rest.
I thought you loved me,
I thought u cared.
All I know now
is this pain is too much to bear.
I take the gun
and I hold it in my hands.
This will end it all;
this will be the last time I stand.
You have taken it all,
you have won;
and I will prove your victory
with this gun.
My eyes fill with tears
as I put it to my head,
I think about you and I close my eyes
and now I’m dead
But now my heart my soul
is finally free
and all I wonder is
what life will you live without me?




Copyright © Ju-Ju ... [ 2003-04-13 23:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:27:28 PM AEST
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I felt this poem, great write, full of emotion. keep em comming.


The Phantom


Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 08:26:25 PM AEST
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No one deserves to hurt you in anyway. I loved thi spoem and that person shoudl regret every hurting you becasue if this were true that person would have to suffer all their life. I loved this poem!


Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by mandy091706187 on Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 05:52:09 PM AEST
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wow... VERY strong emotion, loved it, great read thanks for sharing that with us :)




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