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Love Spell
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 11:34:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you try to act the devil.
A man without no soul.
You act just like a rebel.
So distant and so cold.
You try to hide your kindness.
You try to hide your pain.
But I am not so mindless.
I see through all your games.
Underneath your acting,
There lies a man with heart.
No matter what might happen,
With you I will not part.
You keep me safe from danger.
Protect me in your arms.
Your more than just a stranger.
Your beauty shines like stars.
You say this can not happen.
You say there's just no way.
And yet my heart is trapped in,
The love you hide in vain.
One day soon you'll wonder,
Why it took so long.
To see the spell where under.
Our love can not be wrong.
So keep up your pretending.
But know that I'm not fazed.
You'll always be my blessing.
My love towards you wont fade.
Copyright ©
Nevilleconnie
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2010-04-28 11:34:47]
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Re: Love Spell
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by JakerBaker88 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 02:35:32 PM AEST
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| There were a few grammatical errors but besides those this was a well done love poem. I sure hope that the guy your stuck on realizes he's lucky to have you. ;) By the way, you had a wonderful rhyme scheme in this one. Keep on writing! |
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Re: Love Spell
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by Tory on
Tuesday, 4th May 2010 @ 11:42:19 AM AEST
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| Again good job, and the miss spelled words like me you will hear about that but hay it comes from your heart, if we where pros we would,nt be here. I really do like your style. good job Tory |
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