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holding on letting go
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 11:07:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I never ment to make you cry,
tears to fall from beautiful eyes,
set you free,
never know what that did to me,
set on bended knee,
now set my heart free
this lock and key.
tears fall meddle pellets,
tapping this metal jacket,
trap it, leaking through,
back to you.
dry your tears,
I am here,
always and forever,
please know its true.
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longhaircg
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2010-04-28 11:07:36]
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Re: holding on letting go
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by Breezy on
Thursday, 29th April 2010 @ 07:43:17 AM AEST
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Sad and heartbreaking, this plea and affirmation is filled
with emotion. Sometimes all the heart needs is one word.
Beautifully done. -- Achelois
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Re: holding on letting go
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by Jessi95 on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 06:53:27 PM AEST
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| Wow that is a really good Poem i love it |
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Re: holding on letting go
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 5th May 2010 @ 10:40:13 AM AEST
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Sad, yet a great piece of writing. I hope the message reached its mark.
Deadwriter
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