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Bleeding By the Door

Contributed by Jessi95 on Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 08:53:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

A girl sits on the floor
By the bedroom door
She just cannot stop the bleeding
Because she’s needing
However, does she really want to stop?
can’t she just let her life pop?
Is there happiness waiting ahead
Or is her life lead
Why can’t she just let go
Her parents would never know
They would go on with their life
And not know hers was taken with their own knife
“Will they ever understand this pain that I feel”?
Is the last thing she says as she lets out a squeal?
As she draws her vary last breath
She hovers over her body next to the rest
Will she now have a better way?
As she finds out that, she still has to pay
As she watches, her sister runs in
She screams and drops just like a pin
Her sister will go on with this image in her head
This could have been something she did not have to dread
This site of her sister bleeding on the floor
As she was sits lying by the door

Copyright Â© Jessi95 ... [ 2010-04-26 20:53:59]
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Re: Bleeding By the Door (User Rating: 1 )
by AlbenWeeks on Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 10:21:47 PM AEST
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This is a good poem, though very sad. I'll never truly understand why people hurt themselves like this when there are so many caring people in the world.

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