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An Ode to a Beautiful Girl
Contributed by
erinsaywhat
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Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 09:57:01 PM in AEST
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An Ode to a Beautiful Girl
She walks around
With her head to the ground
She barely ever says a word
Her mind is brilliant
Although my attempts are resilient
Her vision seems to be blurred
For she can’t see
What she means to me
While she thinks that no one cares
I’m trying my best
She would never have guessed
No other girl could ever compare
For this beautiful girl
As precious as a pearl
Stays on my mind all day
She’s more than a friend
I’ll be here until the end
Forever in my heart she will stay
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Re: An Ode to a Beautiful Girl
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by Breezy on
Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 03:39:14 AM AEST
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What a lovely declaration. Your words are impossibly
beautiful. And what a gorgeous release, just allowing
emotion to breathe. This was most enjoyable.
Very captivating. -- Achelois
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Re: An Ode to a Beautiful Girl
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by Nevilleconnie on
Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 08:34:00 AM AEST
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| There are no words to express how beautiful this poem truly is. I had tears in my eye's while reading it, that's how amazing this poem is. |
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Re: An Ode to a Beautiful Girl
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by JakerBaker88 on
Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 05:44:33 PM AEST
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| This was such a sweet love poem. It even made me swoon! I hope to read more from you because you write well. Take care. |
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Re: An Ode to a Beautiful Girl
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 06:40:04 PM AEST
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sweetly beautiful, warm welcome to ypdc,
hugs n' love nessa |
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