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Grudges
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
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Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 05:10:25 PM in AEST
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Trample my feelings,
and see if I care.
I've suffered the dealings,
of many cruel stares.
Scream that I'm worthless.
Although you should know.
My heart, you can't hurt this.
It won't become cold.
Point all your fingers,
and judge as you like.
Pull all your triggers.
Just know I won't cry.
I'll take all the blows,
that you feel I deserve.
I'll be your freak show.
Just know I won't hurt.
You've never held back,
any cruelness at all.
So go and laugh.
But please know I won't fall.
When will you relies?
Oh, when will you see?
I'll give no reply,
to the mean words you speak.
Life would be pointless,
if holding a grudge.
Empty and joyless,
does not sound like fun.
I'll take all your punches.
But still I'll stand tall.
I'm not holding grudges.
Not one, none at all.
Copyright ©
Nevilleconnie
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2010-04-25 17:10:25]
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Re: Grudges
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by AbiIsAnArtistInLove on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 05:18:08 PM AEST
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Gosh,
This is really deep! I think you shared your feelings and you stood high and strong.
Hold onto your poems...
One day, they'll be worth millions, even if they already are.
=D
Coem check out mine if you want. |
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Re: Grudges
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by Chamaron on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 08:44:14 PM AEST
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A very good lesson in the power of self-determination and taking back the power in a situation that in unfavorable. Good job.
One suggestion - a word stronger than "mean" in the line "to the mean words you speak" might really throw in an extra punch. |
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