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The Smell of Rain
Contributed by
Breezy
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Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 11:16:39 AM in AEST
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Bathed in the clean, damp coolness of air
The senses reap inheritance of ancient skies
Like ripened fruit trees that will soon be bare
Embracing deeply the sky’s drenched stare
It soaks into ravines along endless cries
And there inside the mornings break
While sheets of leaves and birds awake
Travelers pilot roads soaked with innocence
Its wave refreshingly takes wing and flies
Unique in its grace like a snowfall’s flake
And save for misty droplets, all sound dies
Breathe deep, the raw uncaptured mist
Where waiting, lies a paradise found
Loss of sky, the sun has kissed
And starlight shine, once upon was wished
Trapped now within the soft, moist ground
Fills up the sense with heavy, wet air
There is a longing that stands naked and bare
Just within the smell of the lingering fresh
Oh, to dwell inside this forever!
Drenched from fragrance sent of heaven
Senses to the edge are driven
Longing just to stay for moments bent
Drowning within the covering of laundered scent
While the wind takes every care
Lying to the sun the spell is cast
Wanting only this moment to last
In the sultry Sunday morning air
The mind whips internal of all things sane
Gripped inside the smell of rain
Copyright ©
Breezy
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2010-04-25 11:16:39]
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Re: The Smell of Rain
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by duff on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 11:25:07 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful capture of peace and life. There is a gorgeous tranquility that lies deep in your words that calms the eyes when reading this passage. The rain breathes life and i adore it so leaving me revel in this fantastic piece of writing hoping for its next fall. Stunning write.
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Re: The Smell of Rain
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by spud on
Monday, 26th April 2010 @ 04:15:06 AM AEST
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Hi,
So descriptively precise in its rendering that I
could feel it, taste it, smell it!
Wonderful.
Tommy
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Re: The Smell of Rain
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 12:16:22 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! Roses at your feet.
Your poem was gripping, dripping, and dropping with the "Smell of Rain!"
EXQUISITE DELIGHT!!!!
As I read it, my dry soul was soaked with your marvelous talent, and your choice of lovely words. You're a "Word Master" for sure!!!
WELCOME Achelois to YPDC........you're going to love it here............and we are very fortunate indeed........to have such a lovely poet in our midst!
Keep up the good work,
Warm love
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Re: The Smell of Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th April 2010 @ 05:33:23 PM AEST
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truly beautiful, a masterpiece that breathes:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Smell of Rain
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by pooja on
Monday, 3rd May 2010 @ 07:55:10 AM AEST
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Wow...this was beautiful....pristine. Something all of us love... "The smell of rain"
U have put the emotions across in a soft , sweet , gentle way that's enchanting
A job well done ! |
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Re: The Smell of Rain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th June 2012 @ 02:38:45 PM AEST
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*****, Roxette, this is fanfreakingtastic. 1259 reads and how did I miss it? Oh yeah, on April 25, 2010 I was then living in hell with Satan's number one sinner. we didn't have internet access in hell. o_O
Oh, to dwell inside this forever!
Drenched from fragrance sent of heaven
You are just beyond awesome and that's my story. I'm stickin' to it!
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Re: The Smell of Rain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th June 2012 @ 02:40:33 PM AEST
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| Never mind, that was 2011. I just somehow missed this. :( |
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Re: The Smell of Rain
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2014 @ 10:21:23 AM AEST
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Jesus! Your account page makes me weep...Both at the awe and beauty in your writes, and from feeling like a joke of a writer when I read your incredible work. It is so easy to hear your lovely poems being read out loud, to eager ears in a crowd. Love it.
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