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A Night with Mr. M
Contributed by
GINA
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Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Too late at night and i can not sleep
Tried those pills ,tried counting cheeps
Nothing is working with him around
Killing this silent with his ugly sound
Too lazy to stop him when he gets near
Aiming my neck ,cheeks and ear
I turned my back, thought he'd go away
But until he makes it , close he'll stay
I dont like it , but also i dont like to hurt
So i surrendered sadly to his nasty dirt
Smoothly and slowly making his move
Hope he's satisfied...what a goof !!
To him it was a need mixed with fun
To me it was a must ,a disgusting one
Now that Mr. mosquito has flew and gone
I came to sleep,but already has rised the sun
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GINA
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2003-04-13 19:25:00]
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Re: A Night with Mr. M
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by shelby on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 08:14:34 PM AEST
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This had me going!! I love this poem!!
Michelle |
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Re: A Night with Mr. M
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 08:45:06 PM AEST
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| omg that poem was great! i thought it was.. but it really was.. argh you TRICKED ME!! haha |
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Re: A Night with Mr. M
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by Opium on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 09:00:38 AM AEST
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| I knew you were talking about a mosquito :P medre lesh! :P, nice poem Gina, I liked it alot |
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Re: A Night with Mr. M
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by ALIEN on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 10:19:49 AM AEST
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its the first time i hear abt this family name , mosquito , hehe
very funny , loved it
Alien ;) |
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