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Stencils
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 09:29:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Leaf stuck to cement,
lifted to see its outline,
stenciling its life
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2010-04-24 21:29:12]
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Re: Stencils
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 09:42:22 PM AEST
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Hmmmm...never really thought of it that way. Excellent idea for a metaphor you came up with here.
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Re: Stencils
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 11:04:05 PM AEST
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| I'm with Tim really like this metaphor,such a detailed imprint too well written |
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Re: Stencils
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by aliopterix on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 12:01:06 AM AEST
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| Once again an excellent piece. Thank you,Aliopterix. |
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Re: Stencils
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by Breezy on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 10:25:38 AM AEST
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This is as beautiful as the footprints of nature themselves. What a
lovely way to describe the remnants of what once was. Things the
naked eye misses when looking for something more. This is gorgeous.
Wonderful post. -- Achelois
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