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Just For You
Contributed by
BrokenHeart
on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 08:18:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When does it stop?
How do I fix it?
Do I want to
It will never end
Love is so beautiful
But also so blind,
When messing with the heart
Its just a place in time
Time is the enemy
For someone in love
For then they realize
Its not a snow white dove
two people in love
is so so special
but it takes just one
to mess up the trestle
a train runs smooth
on a straight narrow track
but take out a section
and the train will crack
we don’t know exactly
what went wrong
but two people
struggling and love is gone
fighting and shouting
threats and words
all that it accomplishes
is a hurt me and you
you gave me hope
I gave you pain
Each day I love you more
That’s crazily insane
But What do you do
When your dreams are broken
You mind is a terrible thing
With no words spoken
Time screeches to a halt
How will it end
When a heart is broken
There is nothing to mend
Take the two broken pieces
Put them together
Add a little love
And problems don’t matter
After all is said
and all is done
two people apart
they are not one
love is hard
and fighting is so handy
but what I know
is that I love you Mandy
the best part of all of this and this is true
from the bottom of my heart
was the time that I spent
that I spent with You
love you baby
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BrokenHeart
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2010-04-24 20:18:40]
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Re: Just For You
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by BrokenHeart on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 09:23:24 PM AEST
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MY GIRL BROKE UP WITH ME YESTERDAY, THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I HAVE EVER WRITTEN ANYTHING, i HAVE BEEN UP FOR THE PAST 2 DAYS, DEPRESSED, LONELY, AND HURT, i JUST STARTED WRITING AND I KNOW IT IS NOT VERY GOOD, BUT AT LEAST IT COMES FROM MY HEART
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Re: Just For You
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by Chamaron on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 11:08:04 PM AEST
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Favorite stanza:
"Take the two broken pieces
Put them together
Add a little love
And problems don’t matter"
Also the train images were very nice, carried through well. My heart aches for you. I hope you find healing. |
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Re: Just For You
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by tjmontanagirl on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 07:47:42 AM AEST
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Once again, another beautiful poem!
Please keep writing, i enjoy reading your poetry.
Your girl must have been very special to to you,
maybe you should send her all of these awesome poems and she'll have a change of heart.
Im a voice of experience because I know if my boyfriend had taken the time to write such wonderful pieces of poetry and they were all devoted to me,
i'd have to take into consideration giving him another chance.
It is a very sweet gesture, and I'm sure others would agree with me :)
~Taylor |
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