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Fog
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 07:43:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Ghostly residue,
mysterious mist lingers,
masking the daylight
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-04-24 19:43:03]
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Re: Fog
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 08:16:22 PM AEST
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Eeeek !!!! Scary.
Now blindness ensues
Grotesque hand from the darkness
Juts towards my throat
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Re: Fog
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by aliopterix on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 11:32:09 PM AEST
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| Nicely atmospheric. Beautiful. Nice job.Aliopterix. |
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Re: Fog
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by elle on
Sunday, 25th April 2010 @ 09:41:49 PM AEST
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Although you've embraced the natural essense that is haiku, you've also added a tinge
of darkness that makes for a double-edged sword, ripe & tantalizing. Great job. elle :) |
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