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The path
Contributed by
LyssaM
on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 08:34:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Devious minds graze the flaming path to eternity
While weak soals struggle to venture up the steep hill to betrayal.
Not knowing what lies ahead they take a chance,
No, a leap of faith into the depths of redemption.
Copyright ©
LyssaM
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2010-04-24 08:34:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The path
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Saturday, 24th April 2010 @ 08:53:03 AM AEST (User
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Short yet courage and bravery fall from your words that summarize this piece. In taking chances we may stumble but when we succeed the rewards can be monumental. Great write.
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